Story: The Proposal

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There was a young girl named Satyavati and she lived with a fisherman who had adopted her. As she grew up, she became the prettiest girl in small fishing town they lived in. Her father was poor, and hoped for a marriage proposal to come from a rich king from out of town. Soon, a king named Shantanu came from the mainland to see her. As his boat approached the shore where she stood, he saw her and immediately fell in love with her beauty. However, the closer he came, the stronger the fish smell became.

“why is the smell of fish becoming stronger as we leave the ocean?” Shantanu questioned his servant. The servant, perplexed, guessed that it was the fish that the fisherman was keeping by the shore. Shantanu became more and more infatuated with Satyavati as the boat grew nearer to the shore. However, the smell also became worryingly stronger. As he stepped out of the boat and kissed Satyavati’s hand, he realized that the strong smell emanated from her. At once, he shouted to Satyavati’s fisherman dad,

“Where are the fish kept?!”

Like a madmad, the king ran to the area outside the home where fish were kept in large containers of chilled water. The smell became weaker.

“Is this all the fish?” he demanded of the fisherman.

“That is all we have,” the fisherman answered.

As he walked nearer to where Satyavati stood smiling, he realized that she was the source, not the fish. He looked longingly at her beautiful face, but he could not overlook her odor.

“I cannot go through with this.” The king said solemnly. He and his advisors and servants packed up their belongings and returned to the mainland. As they left, Satyavati stood by the shore, her eyes following the boat as it disappeared into the sunset.

“Why not me?” she sobbed over and over. “Why can’t he love me?”

She knew that her smell was difficult to accept. Her own father, who sold fish for a living, could sometimes not bear to be near her because her smell was stronger by far than the actual fish.

She sat in a shallow part of the water, continuing to cry to the ocean. But then it answered.

“Why are you crying?”

“He doesn’t want to marry me!” She was now crying so hard she could barely breathe.

The ocean answered again.

“I have heard you crying for many hours here. I am aware of your plight. I was meaning to ask why you are crying when many are waiting to make you their wife.”

She looked out into the ocean and then looked behind her at the home where her family was eating dinner, looking for the body that belonged to the voice.

“You are looking in the wrong direction.”

She looked down at the water and saw a beautiful fish right below the surface of the shallow water.

“There are many below the sea who wish to marry you. They have seen your beauty and have been captivated by your fragrance. All you have to do is come with me and I will lead you to our kingdom in the water.

Satyavati looked back at the fisherman’s house. She didn’t want to leave her family, but she didn’t want to cause them more pain. She dived into the water and followed the brilliantly colored fish to the kingdom. 

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Background: Satyavati actually was the daughter of a fish, but was adopted by a fisherman. She had a fish smell until she promised a I wanted to write a story about Satyavati because her smell seemed like a curse (like from a princess movie). I wanted to make a story where her smell wasn't taken away because she saved herself for the sati, but rather it was celebrated by fish. 

Bibliography: Mahabharata Public Domain Edition

Reading Notes: Mahabharata

One part that seemed really cool in beginning Part A of the Mahabharata was the fact that Ganesha would only write it from dictation if hi pen couldn't stop during the entire time of its telling. Sometimes, I found myself having to stop and look up words (or people), for example, asceticism (which is the avoidancce of any indulgence ). I liked the story where Satyavati was raised by the fisherman's wife and smelled like fish due to a sort of curse. I also really liked the part where she was allowed to lose her fish smell if she saved herself for the person she met on the river. The part when she gives birth to Vyasa but he leaves her is another favorite part of mine. As he leaves, he tells Satyavati that anytime she needs help, all she has to do is think of him and he will be there.

Another story that caught my imagination was the part with Shatanu and Ganga. He see Ganga in human form and immediately falls in love with her. She agrees to marry him as long as he promises to never question her. They get married and she gives birth to their first child. However, Ganga throws her new son into the river. She does this 7 times to her and Shatanu’s children, and he breaks the promise he made when they agreed to marry—he questions her actions. She leaves, but later comes back and tells him why she threw them into the river. (Which is still unclear to me, besides the fact that they are supposedly “the vasus”. When she comes back to tell him this, she brings Shatanu her last child named Devavrata.

Ganga trying to drown last child, Wikipedia 

I also liked the story where Shiva tells Amba to slay Bhishma but she questions him because she is a woman and thinks she can’t fight. I think it’s interesting that she had to change form (into a man) in order to fight Bhishma. Couldn’t she do it as a woman?

The last story that I want to write about is Kunti and her son. She gives birth to her son (whose father is the sun god) and sets him in a basket on the river. He is protected and eventually found by Adhiratha and Radha, who adopt the baby. It is similar to a biblical story where Jochebed sends her baby boy, Moses, down the river to protect him from the killings of baby boys. He is also found (by the Egyptian royal family) and adopted.  

Bibliography: PDE Mahabharata