Story Planning: "The Mouse and the Farmer"

I think I'd like to do a story based on "The Mouse and the Farmer" from my reading yesterday. Unfortunately, I'm not used to simple stories after reading the Ramayana and Mahabharata, so this week's readings have been a strange experience for me.

In "The Mouse and the Farmer," a mouse lives on a farm in a little hole. The farmer was always nice to the mouse (like sometimes he would throw Mousie a piece of cheese during dinner) Fortunately, the farm was built on land that had buried treasure, so one day the mouse gave the farmer a gold coin, and, in exchange, the farmer gave the mouse a good piece of meat to eat. This started happening on a daily basis for a couple of weeks. Soon, a cat named Grimalkin started to notice the mouse since he had gotten fatter. The cat threatened to eat the mouse unless the mouse gave the cat the nice meat. The farmer started noticing that the mouse kept getting skinnier (this was because Grimalkin was eating all of his food). Mousie told the farmer what was happening. The farmer gave him a clear inkwell or similar container, and when the cat came to eat the mouse, it saw the mouse through the inkwell and didn't realize there was a barrier between them. Grimalkin choked on the inkwell and the mouse crawled out of the dead cat's throat.

Brainstorming for plots:

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1. A girl is walking home and always passes by a group of cats and pets them every day when they're laying on the porch of a nearby house. One day, someone walks behind her and tries to attack her, but the cats have come to trust her, so they attack her attacker and nearly kill him/her. Every day after that, the girl keeps bringing the cats food and pets them. Obviously, I'm adding a bit of material as an epilogue but it might work! This version is switching the victim from an animal to a human and I love stories about how animals know more than their human counterparts sometimes.



2. A variation on the tale where Grimalkin sees that the farmer does not feed the Mouse, so instead of the farmer giving the Mouse food, Grimalkin (who is already on the farmer's good side) decides not to kill Mousie and instead gives him food.

I need to start changing up my writing style because I tend to stick with modern storytelling techniques. More ideas?

On a side note, Grimalkin is an old name for "grey cat" so I think I might use a name that translates to a characteristic of a character's personality or appearance.


Bibliography: W.D. Rouse. The Giant Crab and Other Tales from Old India. Link to reading.